Haiku: A Third Rate Romance
“If a June night could talk, it would probably boast it invented romance.” Bernard Williams
Haiku: A Third Rate Romance … Starry-eyed in Pink boots exits the cafe
Haiku: A Third Rate Romance … Starry-eyed in Pink boots exits the cafe
A date night in June
He, Sharp shark. She, starry-eyed
Dress code: casual … cool
Cafe on Main St
Sharp shark is early, she… late
Bad start to a date
Starry-eyed strolls in
Casual cool, leggings, PINK boots
Sharp shark looks … surprised
Have you ever had a third-rate romance unfold? Many of us have had awkward moments trying to find/build a relationship with someone new. For this exercise, I decided to modify a true story to protect the innocent/guilty. In new relationships, we often have expectations that don’t match reality. Humor and clarity help, but if one party really dislikes what the other loves, it is probably best to scram… Go where you’re loved.
“He was everything your mother warned you about when she told you not to walk alone in the dark.” Nenia Campbell
Haiku: A Third Rate Romance … Starry-eyed in Pink boots exits the cafe
Haiku: A Third Rate Romance … Starry-eyed in Pink boots exits the cafe
She finds him … cringes
Zoot suit, Wall Street bound … black shoes
Exit signs in eyes
Sharp Shark speaks: “You’re late!”
Starry eyes replies: “Shucks! Tea?”
Fingers snap … Waiter!
Intros, Orders, taken
Sharp shark, drones on … She fidgets
Drinks arrive … two bills
How did it end? Have you ever had a first date that was far off in left field that you wanted to get up and run out of the building? If we’re being honest, we might even admit to being on the flip side of a third-rate romance at least once; you know, the one who sat while the other party bolted. Whatever the memory, it’s fine because these incidents add something to our bag of life stories and experiences. Ha!
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“Romance is everything.” Gertrude Stein
Haiku: A Third Rate Romance … Starry-eyed in Pink boots exits the cafe
Sharp shark shares his … “taste”
High heels, tight skirts, black boots … silks
Stylish gals, cheap thrills
Starry-eyed smiles … stands
Nary a Bye, Pink Boots … scrams
A 3rd Rate Romance
What inspired this version of a 3rd rate romantic escapade? First off, the WordPress prompt got me thinking about some disastrous encounters. Then I looked at a pair of Pink Doc Martens I bought recently, and an idea formed… Interesting about the creative muse, right? Lately, I’ve been using the Haiku form to create pieces that, while still following the 5-7-5 syllable format, also tell an obvious, straight-up story. I tell the story without too many short, symbolic, coded metaphors. I still love to use some, but the storytelling is also clear. Hope you enjoyed this Wednesday creative writing challenge.
My fellow bloggers were equally creative with their selections. Check out how others interpreted the theme, Third Rate Romance, below.
This post was inspired by a prompt from WP Daily Post: Third Rate Romance. Tell us your funniest relationship disaster story.
Positive Motivation Tip: All relationships and romantic exchanges leave us with memories we can learn from and cherish. Make peace with yours.
PHOTO CREDITS/ATTRIBUTIONS: All Photos from my Personal Collection.
Until Next Time…
Ask. Believe. Receive. ©
Elizabeth Obih-Frank
Mirth and Motivation
Positive Kismet
oh yes, I have had a few lousy first dates. I have had some awesome ones, too, though.
Fortunately I never bolted (or had anyone bolt) on a date. Just seems so rude to do so.
Love boots like this, super comfy and trendy now.
Great post and awesome information to all of us. Worth to read.
In the early years I definitely found myself in some awkward dating situations. It’s crazy how you can get caught up in a relationship even when you know it’s not working.
I love this post. I tell my daughter all the time that her relationships may not last, but it doesn’t mean she has to throw the memories away!
I did not date much. So I have not had this kind of date.
hot boots!!!
This is a very cool read. Thanks for sharing.
Look at those pink boots. They look fabulous! Very cool. Prefect date wear.
GREAT Haiku! You had me giggling!
loving the shoes! i’m trying to block the third rate romance from my past out of my head
beautiful bright boots! I’ve never seen something like those before
I love the color of that boots. I want one
I was suppose to comment about Haiku but my eyes are glued on that pink boots! lol I totally love the color!
Tatanisha Pitts-Worthey
This was great! Yay for Pink Boots getting away ! She can definitely find someone better 🙂 Yes, I have been there, when I knew I wanted to bolt within the first 5 minutes! Sooo glad I am not in the dating game anymore!
I have had a few third rate romances that I would like to forget! Love the pink doc martens. Isn’t it strange how one random object can inspire an old memory or complete revelation about a certain time in your life…
The boots. OMG the boots! I can see why they inspired this.
I love the poem and the pink boots! So fun!
I haven’t been there, but my daughter certainly has. She’s not afraid to end things early in the date though. She’s bold!
My feeling is “flee where you are tolerated and find where you are celebrated.” 🙂
Your story is so funny and I definitely love the pink boots!
The first day I met my husband, I almost peed in my pants. Lol. His humour does help our relationship.
Yes this is a fun way of telling a story, flash haiku!
The first day I met my husband, I laughed soooo much. His humour does makes our relationship fun.
Boy do I have a story of a wayward date ending unexpectedly, but I think I will keep that to myself. 😉
I love your pink boots! 🙂 You made me laugh..thanks for sharing
I love those shoes!! They are so cute!!
Thank you!
I love the color of those boots. Those would be perfect for my sister.
I have been married for so long I can’t even recall bad dates any longer! But I adore your shoes!
I have to say… I am digging those pink docs! I usually can’t get pretty colors with my big feet since I usually have to buy mens. ;(
Great boots! Love the colour – I had a black pair of Doc Martens as a teen. Tempted to buy a new pair 🙂
Remember how comfy they were? They still are… go for it.
Unfortunately I have had one too many third rate romances. Thankfully I never had that problem with shoes. Never met a pair I didn’t like!
Haha! A blogger and shoe lover in crime 🙂
I can’t think of any relationship disaster at present that has occur to me. But I feel comfortable trusting my gut feelings…..And walking away is my only choice.
far as i’m concerned, anybody who can connect Haiku and pink boots 🙂
Ha! <3
Interesting topic to pair with pink Doc Martins. They remind me of my husband’s fashion sense, and that was not a third rate romance at all 😉
He wears pink boots? Cool! <3
I love your pink boots!! They are adorable!!
Ta love! 🙂
OMG! A sense of humor does help. So glad I’m done with those days. Love the boots.
Lucky you! Haha!
I love your boots. I could definitely see my daughter wearing these! She has a pair that are silver and similar to these.
Silver must be quite pretty
Those pink Doc Martens are everything! I love how you use them in that picture form 🙂
That dating scene is def. vivid. Best to bolt and what better way than in some really cute Doc Martens. 🙂
The pink boots looks really cool. This would beyond a shadow of a doubt stand out.
I’ve had third rate romances too, I think almost everyone has. What’s important is to learn from that relationships. Never hold grudges instead embrace what’s not meant to be. Love the boots, btw.
Love your boots it’s really perfect fr winter season.
Oh I’ve definitely had a date like that before. Nothing in common whatsoever. btw I am loving those Doc’s. I just got my 3yr old a pair of flowery ones that she just loves. She wanted to be like big sis who owns a few pairs.
I think it is too harsh to call romance third-rate if it starts off on the wrong foot. Maybe it was the fault of the pink boots? 🙂
I have a few third rate romances but none are with shoes or boots. Those though, are gorgeous! I love the colour!
In every relationship there is something to learn even if it is a third rate romance. Take what you can from it and move on.
Where on Earth did you find those pink Doc Martins? They are so cute and I love a good haiku on any day!
I’m glad that I don’t have to deal with the awkwardness of a first date anymore. I’m sure it could b absolutely lovely, but also really u comfortable, especially if you really aren’t into that person and discover it on your date.
I have a pair of Doc Martens in black, obviously yours in pink is really striking and outstanding. Seriously I am trying to get into haiku, pardon me as my english is not that good.
Omg of course the fashionista in me is digging the boots!!! That color omg LOVE
these boots look awesome would make any outfit look sharp for sure
Who knew you could get such inspiration from a pair of pink boots 🙂
I like the poem AND the pink boots! Romance is a beautiful thing. Making peace with the old is always a good idea.
It’s really fun to read haiku. It’s amazing how in such small amount of words, a great story was told. BTW I love the pink boots 🙂
Thgose are sassy looking boots! I wouldn’t mind having a pair.
Wow those are some really light purple boots.
I cant wait to buy my own doc martenss boots but im planning to buy the maroon boots
Love your haikus but am so glad the days of first dates are far in the past for me.
Love the boots! And I’ve had a few dates like that in my time.
The color of the boots is so different, which I have not seen much before. But I am surely loving it for being so unique. May be I would love to try one such combo or a purple one.
My wife would absolutely love the boots! I think my daughter would like some too if they come in kids sizes.
So interesting! I want to try it. I can think of an interesting dated dating disaster to work out in the haiku, too. And those Doc Martens? Love.
oh my, those are definitely in your face shoes! i wouldn’t know how to wear them
I love those boots, I prefer boots over any kind of shoe design which is funny since we live in a tropical country and it would be really hot and uncomfortable to wear them all year round as I wish.
A third rate romance? I don’t think I have any of those to share. My husband was my first boyfriend and last, and we always have funny dates but wouldn’t fall into the disaster category. Haha.
yeah, same with others , the pinks shoes caught my attention…some girls might like them 🙂
Ugh, I can’t even begin to tell the horror stories I have experienced. Lol, definitely learning experiences for me. Sometimes the reality you see in your mind doesn’t click with actual reality and that’s when you have to move on.
I LOVED the color and looks like a durable boots.
I like how you wrote this, it’s short, but tells a clear story of a failed/disastrous date. I do assume this one is a blind date, since the two are sooo far off.
So cute… I love those shoes design and color too!!
Wow those boots are really something, very different, my daughter would love them.
A very timely post! I know someone close to me who’s had a disastrous relationship, one that ended in shattered lives. Had I known about it, I would have meddled, of course.
I’ve had my fair shares of third rate romance disasters lol. Those shoes are not a disaster though, I want some now.
Hahah! They are Doc Martens! You can have them anytime. 🙂
What fun colored boots. I love making a fashion statement with shoes…especially with a monochromatic outfit.